Saturday, February 21, 2009
did that even provide ANY bit of suspence? I TRIED...but i suck at suspence lar sadd...cause like the climax is SO ANTI CLIMAX. and i dont know how to build it up! but ill keep trying >_<
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shun practically jumps of the swing and runs to a subconscious rin.
-shun-"oi. rin! u ok?"-carries her head in his arms and shakes-
-rin-groans-"ahaha...got to excit-"-passesout-
-shun-"rin! OI!!!" ARGH she just HAD to get so excited and swing SO high and FALL. this girl has trouble upon trouble!!! first things first. get her to the hospital.
shun runs while carrying her in princess carry ^^ woah lucky rin. gets so many stares from the public that are pure envy kekeke. at the hospital doctor check ups and all and then while shun was kinda pacing up and down...
-shun- ahhhh i hope rin's gonna be okay... should i call ralph? even if its fake or something at least he is someone she likes right? so...i should call him? i dont feel like calling him. but i sh-(should shouldnt i?)
-ringringring-ralph-
-shun-wth. speack of the devil =.="hi ralph. was gonna call u."
-ralph-"oh? ive been calling rin but she wasnt picking up. U LUCKY GUY. U DIDNT GET CAUGHT BY SHER. UR SISTER IS DAMN IRRITATING."
-shun-"as irritating as you. anyway rin's in hospital. she fell down a swing and im dead late for my shooting. ever since she came along ive been late for almost EVERY shoot. =.="
-ralph-"omg. which hospital? im absolutely free so ill head there. u should go for ur shooting she'll be fine. ill be around anyway."
-shun- the whole prob is CAUSE ur around idiot! why i dont know but i hate seeing them together =.= and wats with the confimation of she'll be fine? im the one that saw her fall not ralph! this is driving me nuts!"yea ill do that. thanks man. life saver come to alexandra hospital NOW"
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-ralph-"shun ur late arent you? go already!"
-shun-"yea ill go. rin is just on that bed sleeping. the doc said she was okay except for a bump at the back of her head that caused her to faint or something. ill be off now"
-ralph-hmm...he is definately worried hahaha! this guy can be so cute. "yea off u go and dont worry about her and fail ur shoot!"
-shun-"who do u think i am?" oh heck with his mind reading.
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shun runs off for his shoot WITH the car this time. still ends up late though. about an hour late? KEKEKE im evil LOLS.
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-ralph-stares at rin-am i...seriously in love? i feel hot...but isnt that normal? im a play boy right? -glances around at other girls-internalwhistle- there are a few chicks in the hospital...some nurses too haha. but...this feeling is different...its the same weird one i got with dense shun's stupid sister... man am i changing or something? better act and hide my real self for a moment.
-rin-groans-mutters-"shun"
-ralph-"wat??" wat did she say? it was so suttle i missed it...-gets closer-
-rin-groans-"shun~"
-ralph-oh my...no time for my feelings these two got potential!
-rin-groans-"baka shun..."
-ralph-or...maybe not =.="
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haha not a vry gd ending but...better than nothing =x i go bathie LOL cyaa... sad...only zhen reads already. ohwells better than nothing ^^ sher doesnt read at all...its not up to lak's romance standards... joanna doesnt really come online tat often... mal seems pretty busy with other stuff... sad lar. all the readers not interested ler =x and my stupid compo ARGH i failed it i got 10/30!! NOOOOOOOOO haha... liking eng more n more ^^
Innocence, hatsudo...
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